Black Poetry : Intrinsic Black

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 13, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Completely...
    That's me!
    Beyond what you see
    Sweetest juice,
    From the blackest berry
    Nappy (naturally)

    Coming at you,
    In sorted hues
    Something borrowed
    Something blue (sound familiar)

    Intrinsic Black
    Gets in your face
    Masking your disgrace
    It sets the pace
    To locomotion ~
    Enhanced (providing grace)

    As evolution
    Learns to dance
    D-i-s-t-a-n-c-e-d
    From the source (STAY BLACK)





    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how ironic...I was just working on a presentation
    called intrinsic...but it dealt with motivation

    however...I love the way you've applied the term...
    and yes black must be internal...a state of being
    extrinsic...will get you no where fast...too conditional

    love the flow! :bowdown:
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed.

    Black is more than the color of skin, it's a mindstate.

    If you're not black inside, U are a traitor, some call 'em Uncle Tom or oreos, me, I call them colored.

    Nice piece.
     
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    indeed lovin what ya laid before us...
    flow on.......
     
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    Love the way you put this together and the message behind it.
     
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    This is the kind of peice that makes me proud.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    handz in da air on point and tyte drop of blackness
     
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    BACK TO BASICS BACK TO BLACK!

    Wonderfully insigthful look at a profound concept, bringing
    home a message pure and real!

    Blessings on Your House!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Black Pride is a birth given right, the love of oneself a responsibility.

    I love you all, thanks!
     
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    triniti424 going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Our people can not get enough of these messages so let us say it LOUD
    BLAK AND PROUD
    INSIDE AND OUT!!
     
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