Black Poetry : Intrigue

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  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace family... I know it's been quite some time since I have communed with you all.. I have been in the field working open mics around about my city, but oh how i do miss this set being that it was my first... peace and love enjoy my growth...

    Intrigue

    Perhaps the possibility of elapsing time while finding comfort in your smile, sounds a little far fetched,
    or the thought of endless nights of embraced poetic moments leaving the clock hands stretched...
    seems a little corny at best but
    my confession is a inner deep possesion
    I'm incited to explore, care to join?
    As I release a more intuitive side of minds reside
    and allow you access to my position...
    I'm intrigued by the ways of you
    and all that surrounds your essence everytime you make a sound...
    whether it be breathing or relieving your mental state
    I become innate in passion with visions of our love escapes.
    Perhaps the possibilites are a simple, simple mindness demeaning...
    but the art of dreaming is creating hope in believing
    that one day I can write lyrics to your breathes
    as we explore our depths
    in a fashion that leaves victoria keeping all our secrets....
    I can unearth this imaginitive imagination of mine
    and allow you to get lost inside.
    One day we'll ride out towards the sun
    and when our eyes meet will become one...
    we will have won this battle in the crazy game of like...
    because love is something that doesn't just happen over night...
    we will cut loose,
    You rise like Zeus and take you throne
    and I'll be your Aphrodite dancing in a grace of my own....
    we will be...
    yes we will be...
    a vision of perfect history
    but until I find the words to speak,
    it is simply a possibility of intrigue

    Peace and Blessings Family
     
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    yes indeed ......as i smile upon ya return and the lyrical words of joy
    Welcome back home .....
     
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    Wow. The quick pace, the clever use of rhymes, the in depth way you described that interest at it's peak...I'm loving it all. Welcome back!
     
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    Back to the top. :)
     
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    True Flow, you captivated me with this lyrical stream. Very refreshing to read about a love this strong
     
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    nfinite:
    Oh how I like...I like...
    this write.

    Much Luv
     
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    WOW

    nfinite

    You are inspirational! I think it would great to write a collaboration with you

    You have found the words to speak,
    and this flow is more, much more than a possibility of intrigue.

    It's a :bomb: flow.


    Some of my favorite lines...

    Perhaps the possibility of elapsing time while finding comfort in your smile, sounds a little far fetched.

    I'm intrigued by the ways of you
    and all that surrounds your essence everytime you make a sound...
    whether it be breathing or relieving your mental state
    I become innate in passion with visions of our love escapes.

    This poem is truly intriguing. It is absorbing and gripping. You express things in this flow. I know exist but never could put words to the understanding. This is my first read of your poetry. I really enjoyed this and I look forward to reading more of your writings.
     
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