Black Poetry : Intoxicating Love by Bishop/Nevar caution!!

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop

    Hitting it hot and heavy
    we emerge from a steaming hot tub
    our temperatures boiling over
    as I hold your soft and soaking wet frame
    in my hands
    while biting gently your supple nipples
    knowing that tonight
    will be a ride that neither one of us would forget
    picking you up from the hot tub
    I carry you over to the rose covered bed
    laying you down
    I pop a strawberry in my mouth
    and go down between your thighs
    where I begin to eat and lick
    suck and tuck
    the berry and my tongue
    into your pleasure center
    the sweet taste of strawberry
    mingled with your nectar
    intoxicates me to the point where
    I never want to recover from this hangover....​
    Nevar

    Your tongue hitting it hot and heavy
    My legs are ever so unsteady

    The passion is on rize
    You feel the moisture between my thighz

    I say baby let me return a favor
    Let me pour on you my favorite flavor

    Chocolate
    So Provocative

    That I pour it on the tip
    I see the smile upon your face as I just flip

    This
    Giving my daddy a succulent kiss

    As I tease around the form
    Going outside of the norm

    I begin caressing and stroking
    I see them eyez strolling

    That I go down the path
    My tongue is unleashing the wrath

    As I pull on the stick
    Baby Halloween coming so nice this trick

    Was such a treat
    Let our tongues complete

    As I too don't want to recover from this hangover!!!!!

    This Intoxicating Love will continue!!!!!!!!​
     
  2. queentswana

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    Whew..
    I sure hope yall don't hurt each other, but it's quite plain to see that ya feeling :sand: each other to the raw core.
    I ain't mad at cha ...not at all ...^5 to a steamy joint.
    good to see ya back in the house Bishop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    xtreme twist of heat up in here...whewwwwwww!!! y'all got it boiling
     
  4. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it was an honor collaborating with such a gifted poetess like nevar....I bow in her presence.
     
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    to Queen thanks for showing us some love

    Rich it was xtreme wasnt it

    and to you Bishop hopefully many more of our xtreme twist will follow. Thanks for working with me! Love ya!​
    :wine:
     
  6. da TRUTH

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    that was kind on the freaky side, yet u kept it nice and clean. i liked dat
     
  7. Amun-Ra

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    Well done! Bravo! Believe it or not, this reminds me of an old Freddie Jackson song--I liked it--read it twice--Amun-Ra
     
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    RA!!!! Long time no see my brutha!!! Thanks for tha love!
     
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    I likes.....

    Nevar & Bishop
    getting they grown & sexy all
    This is so good!!!!
     
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    um

    Your tongue hitting it hot and heavy
    My legs are ever so unsteady

    i don't appreciate Bishop taking my job

    lololololololol

    seductive piece

    ok ok just plain nasty piece

    and glad to you Bishop

    peace Nevar
     
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