Black Poetry : Intoxicated

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Irresistible impulse
    drove me upon u
    for this very instant
    i saw abyss
    i realized it's depth
    and then vertigo
    sweap me ova in

    (intoxication)

    I can forget my
    very existence
    in da deep beauty
    of u and da glance
    of ya maple eyez
    the butta smooth
    skin like silk and
    within da wall of
    ya love
    everything
    languished

    intoxicated
    in da depth of u
    ya soft voice
    send me into a
    mesmerized notion
    i'm not so blindly
    my soul beyond reach
    at that moment
    love strikes like a massive
    war of brown bombers
    elited delight of delicious
    feelings take control
    in da most compassionate
    faze of mazement

    Intoxicated love
    set forth upon me
    i feel the devine fury
    everything announces
    thy presence

    so sweet & juicy
    i'm intoxicated
    in a rapture
    from her timble trunkz
    of beautiful legz
    to da swayz
    from the hips
    firm back
    dis intoxication
    has me all whack
    my love now live
    inside da walls
    of her beauty
    and hold a mental
    caress in my mind
    my heart on a rapid beat
    she a real treat
    intoxication controlling me !:eek:

    pt. ll intoxicated luv :heart: :love: :heart:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol cute yet meaningful poem when you think about luv is intoxicating keep flowin i enjoy yo work :)
     
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    indeed Thankz serenti-poet
    intoxication of luv can be sweet
     
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    Drunk with passion,
    Makes you $$RICH$$
    Ladies, look out...
    I'm feelin' this!
     
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    There you go again!

    Your words so sweet head spinning
    you knock me off my feet
    drunk from the luv and the erotic poetic
    vintage that is you
    full of flavor to savor and a smooth heady
    fragrance of sweeter delight and the hint
    of what comes in the flight of the night...
    You da man!

    Blessings On Ya House!
    smooches:kiss:
     
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    it was the last toast we had that took ova my head
    ladies be aware intoxication seeping fast
    1poet u know me i be in a motional bliss Thanks
     
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    now now sista B
    see intoxication of love
    had me on dat last taste
    now i face the rapture

    i think it was u who did dat to me !
    u know me too well i'm watching u
    Thankz my sweet Queeneth

    again get well my prayers with you
    on dat day i will share a moment of silent
    to pray for you and wish u back on ya feet strong as ever
    hurry back to my home town we got things to do!!
     
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    intoxication of a intoxicated love that's so toxic
    i can't even think !
    let me be ............i can't help it
    don't wanna stop
    drunk on dis i like
    let me be......................
     
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    is there a 12 step program for such intoxicating love? if so, please don't let my lady know :lol:
     
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    Mr.D
    I promise not to tell her
    don't let her watch ch. 47 late night hour
    when i'm in motion she might learn it
    and put it on u !..................lol
    Thanks my GODLY brutha in christ
     
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