Black Poetry : Intoxicated and dedicated

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jul 15, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Intoxicated and dedicated

    Try fix structures and mix cultures just to come with some
    Ill Hip Hop and make lips drop to the beats on the streets
    Got water to drink ready to slaughter with ink this keeps
    Me busy can smell the swell vapor from my paper peeks
    To the Heavens, rhymes unique and ill while other seek skills
    Take freak pills for headache use my filled brains to amuse, thrill
    And entertain, in life the facts ride, must act and decide
    The best route and test out the road first try not to collide
    With obstacles, try prevail hot but in the mailbox are strange
    Notations had to change locations these dang bill collectors rearrange
    Style of life through wild strife fall blank had to call the bank pathetic
    Communion, contacted the credit union wanted to borrow some energetic
    Cash that smell new but that fell through after a background check
    Hated to look at myself as a whack clown wrecked but I am must correct
    This turned a few door knobs got a hardcore job play cards must trust my deck //
    from farm to cities stuff storms committees of whackness even cats
    In FUBU fitties need some practice being a dumb actress don’t get you stats
    Flows and wears bling dispose of rings by selling, go tto hussle with muscle
    To survive and stay alive some cats say jive that don’t make have to tussle
    With facts to find the truth as a blind youth need divine truth
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now dat was tyte and on point bruh !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your pen has an urge, a need to write. We all can certainly relate to that rhymebad.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Impressive style..I really enjoyed this read.

    Keep that flow goin kid!

    -L
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to everyone who enjoyed and responded fo rreal
     
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