Black Poetry : INTO U

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jun 14, 2005.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My… chocolate delight
    You move me to your light
    In open dreams of the night
    Your touch reaches
    ….my soul
    As I bathe in your spirit
    Trying to find a way to run
    But….
    My heart keeps running back to
    …. You
    Wanting to open up…
    I loved once…
    Now
    I find myself wanting to love you

    Is it possible to be spoiled by your touch?
    Mentally… For my soul is intoxicated
    Of a deep passion to mix with you
    I want you to be my fix

    Do you know?

    Your mind feeds me in the distance
    I get so lost in the trance
    ….of…you
    As I back up off you
    You pull me closer
    My rib is mate to yours
    You can be my King
    I can be your Queen
    Lets create nature
    In a far off place
    Removed from our bodies
    A dream touched…
    As our world begins to grow
    Beyond reasons
    Within every measure
    Your spirit is calling
    ...My spirit answered

    Unto my love I call
    Do you know?
    Can you hear?
    Can you begin to understand?
    It's about to be a situation
    Of a mental tease that
    Releases the Dream maker of a
    Pleasure releaser .... I want
    .....I want

    I am waiting on you
    …You to notice
    I am willing to be your potion
    Making every notion
    For you to take the motion
    And feel my emotions….
    I want to touch heaven with you


    (C) 2005
    ~ROSE FIRE~
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~I want to touch heaven with you~
    Wow, that's sea-level deep...
    do you know how many people live their entire life, without ever reaching their heaven?
    *Heaven* is a sweet state of mind to be in, it sorta like...makes ya wanna holla, throw up both ya hands.
    this was/is a beautiful slice of heaven, thanks for the smile​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
    uncore Angel uncore
    this was outstanding deep and sweet
    i can feel the gates opening up to touch
    wow.......how i love this flow
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece is nice...got me wanting to write a follow up piece.

    blak
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QT thank you for the love and support you give happy you enjoyed...

    Rich....you likes? cool i am happy you enjoyed and feeling as the gates open

    Verb...hey now...flow head on i am happy you enjoyed the scribe

    Thank you all for the loving support you show me....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    most welcome indeed dear Queeneth
     
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    Very lovely write.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the support and love

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    peace Angel,

    With this kind of scribe, it could cause other minds to want to get into you!!

    peace
     
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    Mz Blk you know you got a true poetic light around you. I really enjoyed reading this:)