Black Poetry : Into the Dragon's Lair......(Fantasy piece)

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Into the Dragon's Lair
    Into the Dragon's Lair
    Into the Dragon's Lair

    I stand alone in chains waiting for you to rescue me
    Sent word through a Raven of my daring escape
    Our adventures we both have shared
    Every time your caught, I am there to help
    "No hesitation"
    I repeat
    "No hesitation"
    I've been burned, cut, beaten just to save you
    Why do I feel I am to be a damsel in distress
    I look at these chains made of strong metal
    I'm a fighter no man made iron can keep me down
    I thought about our battles we have fought
    The love we made
    And the many promises of forever being yours
    You love me, but the emotions you never shown are questionable
    Feeling the dragon's heated breathe upon my darken skin
    Beads of sweat upon my face
    And a tongue longing for water to quench
    Feet tired from the long walk on their thorned trail
    Bare, blistered as I walked along this darkened place
    I imagine you on your horse hurrying to get to me
    Hurry love before the Dragon awakes
    You send the same Raven to let me know of your arrival
    But still no you
    Hours has past, and now night creeps in
    I feel my life slipping away
    No food, no water, no you
    He stirs
    I'm scared
    He stirs again
    No Raven
    No you
    The fire from his breathe is now hotter
    Flames from his nostrils are burning
    The chains have now settled into my skin
    Bloods come rushing from my struggles
    His movement is rapid
    His breathing is more
    His eyes are now open
    My love why have you forsaken me?
    Haven't I saved you from seeing the Angel of Death
    Why must my fate be of death?
    Our enemy has left me to devoured by this creature
    The intense heat of the dragon's lair has caused me to hallucinate
    The hallucination of another maiden
    You lying there with her breast in your hands
    And your lips upon hers
    And the bare skin of hers upon yours
    Tears begin to rush
    How eyes redder than rubies
    Her lips lined with poison
    As you dranked from her esscence
    I shook my head in disbelief
    How could you just let me die?
    How could you put my rescue on hold to lay with Jezebel?
    I cursed her for decieving you
    I cursed you for not fighting for us
    [email protected] you
    [email protected] her
    Awaiting my fate as I stare now into the beast eyes
    Saliva falling rapidly from his horned mouth
    No Raven
    No you
    Will you let me die my love?
    In the Dragon's Lair.................



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    this was a story book tale indeed
     
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    Really enjoyed the creativity here. Did she just hallucinate, or is what she envisioned actually their fate? A part 2 would be very nice...hint, hint.
     
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    Hello Nevar

    Wow, this was intense! It read like a nightmare(ish) dream of infidelity suspicions


    Flow on!

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    thank you all for reading my piece!
     
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