Black Poetry : Intimate Love {Haikued Verses}

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jazz softly playing.
    A cloud nine experience
    With the man she loves.

    Soft tender utters
    Amidst whimsical teases...
    Insistent pressure.

    His love makes entrance.
    His sweat, her tears and her blood.
    Pain and pleasure mixed.

    His love is patient.
    Woman turned bride turned woman...
    She grips him tightly.

    The pain, then pleasure.
    Only God could think of this...
    Temporary pain.

    This was her desire.
    "A husband who gives,
    me sensuos joy."

    Her prayer was answered
    Over and over again...
    Couldn't get enough.

    His sax played softly.
    Each note caressed her being.
    Played for her only.
     
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    sis....

    you know what you know.....

    ha'h mer-say

    :)

    a
     
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    I'm wit Sustah A.... :) Joyce, you know what you know... and, you know it so well!!

    You ink well neva runs dry!!

    :heart: it sis'!!

    N2
     
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    wow!!!! sistah Joyce u bring a bang when u come in da house
    lite my room up again! u most def know what u know...
     
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    Joyce...

    This is so lovely
    how it should be...
    the essence of the first...you captured it so well...nice..:toast:

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Joyce,

    Can you say perfect???

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read poets,

    This is a special dedication to my sister, who at age 28 got married after having waited patiently (as a virgin) for the right man. They have been married nine years now and hehehe...she still can't get enough! :) ...but then I am one to laugh. :)
     
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    b you te full.

    you're astounding Joyce.

    jh
     
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    Well Done!

    This was an innovative use of a tried form--well done--I certainly appreciated it!

    Amun-Ra

    :)
     
  10. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah: Well I wouldn't say all dat...chucks...thank ya anyway.

    Amun-Ra: Thanks for the read. Glad you liked.
     
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