Khasm13 : intertwining effervescence...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    how did you get me feeling what im feeling?

    im seeing colors ive never seen
    im hearing things i never heard

    baby, what drug are you dealing?

    that has me with this feeling
    feeling you feeling me
    feeling me feeling you
    inside out
    and all the way thru
    Lord if i only knew
    what you did to me
    to set my love free
    free as the cosmic stars
    i see in thee
    baby
    you're love is everlasting
    and replenishing like the sea

    how did you bring life
    to the dead piece of me?

    truly
    you are the other half of me
    and in your eyes i see
    me you and a family
    so smoothly
    your love has overtaken me
    and all the negativity
    in me
    from past lives

    why am i transfixed by your eyes?

    that makes my heart rise
    to the beat of your soul

    how can i feel so whole?

    this is what God must have meant
    putting man and woman on this earth
    intertwining effervescence
    manifested by his blessing
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another true work of art...oh, the power of perfect love and the effect it has--once found...feelings of elation, washing away of pain, the newness and excitement of a future...This was magnificent!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...all throught this poem all i thought about was my husband...i love this...
     
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    I feel the grip your in. It's a piece of coming to life. Growing anew. Smelling the flowers maybe for the first time. Very Nice.
     
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    i am smiling..this is so nice..powerful....poet...feelin you..
    Peace
     
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    OoO...Khas has been bitten by the DEEP love bug :) :cool:
    This is such a good flow :)
     
  7. Khasm13

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    thanks fam...
    love is such a creative thing
    when you actually feel it...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this so much I needed to read it again...:spinstar:
     
  9. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A love spoken from the heart
    Of one that has been amazing from the start
    The love that you speak of
    Sets apart
    The world from the divine image such
    As the one above
    Keep on spreading love.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  10. Khasm13

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    thanks angeli for checkin me out again...you're so sweet :heart:

    play--this love that i speak of, i hope to atually feel one day...
    i hate it sometimes that i just have a good @ss imagination
    thanks
    peace
    khasm