Black Poetry : Intertwine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tanya1023, Dec 26, 2003.

  1. Tanya1023

    Tanya1023 New Member MEMBER

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    When i place my smooth, soft lips
    on your magnificent, mahogany face
    i know it feels good by the way you draw my body closer to you
    you place your hands gently around my waist
    and hold me as if i might get away
    you kiss me as if you've never felt anything more erotic
    you drift away to somewhere exotic
    you forget about everything and focus on right here and right now
    i hit your neck and your ear and you **** near black out
    your heart breaks when i let go of you
    but you pull me back and do what you do
    best
    and you do it better thatn all the rest
    having me thinking about you for days and days after
    wishing that the time for your next visit would go by faster
    you have your days when you try to fight me off
    but you always give in 'cause my body's so soft
    you want more and more as do i
    getting impatient
    waiting for the next time we intertwine
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woo, this is tight! diggin the flow, girl
     
  3. Tanya1023

    Tanya1023 New Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaa!!!
    nice scribe i hear ya