Black Poetry : interpretation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 8, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My erotic illusions
    are actual prognostications,
    A revelation forged by edification
    of my soon to be with you
    freaky intimate mental declarations,
    Though I gave no indication
    of my lyrical adaptation,
    Just for you in this poem,
    I will exercise thru this demonstration,
    Bringing illumination
    to all those in adumbration,
    Still stuck with flaccid lovers
    who are emotionless
    filled with constipated word deliberation,
    What you feel from me
    is no misconception,
    This is I do is beyond copesthetic,
    Sensually Sanctioned...
    Deliciously Designated...
    A Licentious Love...
    That stands the test of time
    throughout duration,
    This you hold inside
    will always stay true
    a microcosmic continuation
    of all existence,
    Cause to deny it
    is to deny me,
    Along with all of my mental orgasms
    that creates between your legs
    the wetness you feel & see,
    Which in the end
    won’t allow you to let me be,
    So poetically
    I await your next interpretation....

    Caramelpython 2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: this was deep...
    a mental trip :hot:

    just a Angels view... :angel1:
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoooaaaaaa!!

    this is so tyte that im speechless... omg this is just tyte...lol
     
  4. krazelyricks

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    oh my.....very tyte...lovin tha vibez tha flow thur this.......lovin it all... did I say that this was :flamet:
     
  5. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Again, you got me feeling this, I love your style.
    Keep it coming!
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: wow...I mean, I am speechless by the intense word useage and the imagery. this is an incredible piece of work, caramel.
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TY all I am pleased you have enjoyed my work.
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis
    Hiclass_female
    foxylady30315
    Olakuoto
    poeticlyspeakin
    mzblkangel
    I thank you all for reading and replying 2 my work.
    Peace N Poetry 2 you all.
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well your "actual prognostications"
    sparked my fascination...lyrical linguistics were off the chain :)
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424 TY TY
     
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