Quiet Poetry Lounge : Intergalactic Hide-N-Seek

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, May 14, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a playground we have
    This vastness of space
    Hiding behind stars
    Hiding from each other
    While hoping to be found
    Ummmmm
    Sweet kisses on the Big Dipper
    Dark cavities explored
    Weightless
    Gravity be damned
    On the dark side of the moon
    We play our sweet games
    You smile your alien smile
    Then
    Like the flash of a comet
    You leave
    Tricking me into looking for you
    Where no man has ever gone before
    Are you smiling at me from an uncharted planet?
    I love playing with you
    I will search for you in distant galaxies
    Traveling at the speed of love

    BE
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    truly what it means to make interplanetary, extra-ordinary ~ love!

    thank you for this, BE

    a

    :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! i mean what a dip
    da play of seek n' hide
    on point
     
  4. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this ! ... its sweet, playful, sexy, and mischevious... :welldone: Poet

    Akilah :sand: :spinstar: :star:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And always, a HEARTBEAT away.

    Much love!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the use of the cosmos as a metaphor, playfully creative, I really enjoyed this.
     
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