Khasm13 : interdimensional tapestry...

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  1. Khasm13

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    celestial seas brings a cosmic breeze that bends starlit trees
    still...this unstopable force on course from the source leaves my mind at ease
    the astral plane bangs against my knees at a 180 degrees
    things always seem to happen in threes
    like brew, ******** and cheese
    or
    wood, fire and chimneys
    but i'm digress'n on these
    infinite possibilities...and the supernatural symmetries
    one master lock...but many underdeveloped keys
    only one cure...but many infected with disease
    travelin past light speed in my starship steed
    planted in my head was an unbelievable seed
    not every dimension revolves around hate and greed
    and not every dimension disolves certain distinctive creeds
    but what really made me stand up and take heed
    was stepping back in the first dimensional galaxy
    and watching how all the dimensions were interwoven together
    forming an undeniably emmense interdimensional tapestry
    way past all the concepts of mans imageries and mastery...
     
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    miss-no-love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like this, keep on doing ya thang. 1love


    When you look in the mirrior what you see may not be yourself
     
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    Your words took me there khasm, imagining a time when all the dimensions where linked together, this was deep, and I'm not just saying that to be cliche, it really was food for thought. Terrific creativity, flow on.
     
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    outstanding mindful creativity if only we could or know all elements could
    be blend as one in a single place , well my mind just running somewhere
    peace brutha
     
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    WHOA!! You dazzle with the deep thoughts, and wrap it up in a nice, tight flow. This is off tha chain, bro, for real.
     
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    I love that line...
    but I love the message in this gorgeous piece much more

    sometimes...we just have to slow down
    we can often find the answers to our questions
    in the "stillness of our observation"
    of the interdimensional tapestries

    loving this "multi-dimensionally layered piece"
     
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    peace,

    true indeed Khas........flow on!!!!

    peace
     
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    Now you know you took me on a ride of poetic delight i love how you pose your work it takes me all the time Poet...Love ya my brother keep on doing ya do....i see our youth studying your scribes in english...Angel
     
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    Sailing celestial seas baptizing ones soul in the power that is…
    Interdimensional tapestries
    shootin the breeze, as the sensation of phenomenal possibilities
    knowing the existence that persists beyond these fragile confines
    is only as powerful as it is defined
    fingering the tapestry as I glide higher
    higher
    higher
    higher
    into the interdimensial tapestry
    I seek
    I search
    I will…sail these starry seas…and be free.
     
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    Stroke that wormhole with soul!
     
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