Black Poetry : Intention of Love

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    [COLOR=royal blue]some people fall in love
    a thousand times

    yet i believe in love once
    in a lifetime

    if you search hard enough,
    then you're sure to find that
    one true love with a magnificent
    mind

    no one can see your heart shine
    through
    no one knows except for you
    arising star

    standing exactly where you are

    some people fall out of love
    a thousand times

    never sharing what's on their
    minds

    that malitant kind
    keeping you under duress

    making a stretch for your behind

    repetitive signs of stress simply
    to put your love to the test for
    some S-E-X

    and no one can see your heart
    shine through

    no one knows except for you
    arising star

    standing exactly where you are
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  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An excellent poetic take on the complexity of this thing. Well said.

    BE
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    very complex

    thanx

    pd :)
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for this one :toast:
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    hey jh

    glad you liked it :)

    ~hey and don't be madd
    at me~

    pd
     
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