Black Poetry : Intent

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 23, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What was your intent
    What was meant
    When we first met
    Or, did you forget?
    Was it to keep me
    under your thumb?
    Lay heavy on my words
    until my patience grew numb?
    Was it to strip me
    body and soul, bare?
    Use me up until part of me died,
    then leave without a care?
    We may be worlds apart
    But I truly have
    a pure heart
    If you'd stop plotting
    you would know
    that your intent
    was so.......
    Calculated.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved how everything wrapped up together in the end. NICE!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Phenomenalwoman, glad you liked the way I brought this all to a close...thankyou.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was tyte.......that was so so so ripe......jazzy....and all that other kind of stuff.....much love for this....this piece was snappin'....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes very nicely done flow on sistah
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey there, Foxi, thanks so much for appreciating and responding to this piece.
    Rich, always nice to hear from ya, glad you're likin this....thankyou.
     
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