Black Poetry : Intent

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticallyJust, Dec 14, 2003.

  1. PoeticallyJust

    PoeticallyJust Member MEMBER

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    Strong, raw no questions or reasons why
    No declarations of feelings or lies
    Ecstasy borderline fantasy
    Soulfully Loving me
    Mentally touching thee
    Forceful and wet
    With lust filled intent
    One night of passion we'll never forget
    As I watch the sweat drip
    From your head to my lips
    Your strong hands grip my thighs
    As I feel your love throughout hips
    I give you me so do as you will
    I promise you that I won't lie still
    You'll see it in my eyes and feel it inside me
    Our bodies together harmoniously
    When it's all over and we both have released
    The rain of love and it has covered us completely
    Hands still entwined bodies still together
    Hoping that this feeling lasts forever
    Into each other’s eyes we both stare
    Wondering where do we go from here?
     
  2. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was tight, very vivid. I love it.
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this, keep on doin the **** thang!
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot vibe. Hoping to hear more from ya.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed dis was awesome drop and tyte scribe
    flow on speak
     
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