Black Poetry : Intensely!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    INTENSELY, IMMENSELY CONVINCE ME TO STAY
    WHY LUTHER IS ON THE BOX READY TO PLAY
    GIVE ME A REASON?????
    INTENSELY , I GAZE INTO YOUR HAZEL WATERY
    EYES AND LOOK FOR A HINT OF LARCENY
    AND DISGUISE
    SEE I KNEW YOU WERE GOING TO PULL THIS ****!
    ONCE I TOLD YOU HE WAS IT...
    HEADING DOWN THE WEDDING AISLE
    NOW HERE YOU COME WITH A DUMB *** SMILE...
    I WANT YOU BACK
    I NEED YOU BACK
    I'LL TREAT YA RIGHT!
    WE WILL NEVER FIGHT!
    YEAH RIGHT!
    YA JUST LIED!
    GOOD NIGHT!
    INTENSELY IMMENSELY HE TRIED TO CONVINCE ME
    BUT I AIN'T GOING DOWN THAT ROAD AGAIN....
    I KNEW IT
    YOU BLEW IT
    HAD 17 YEARS TO GET IT RIGHT
    WHAT? YOU BACK AGAIN!
    "I SAID GOOD NIGHT!":nono: :nono: :nono: :nono: :nono:
    BJS(C)2002
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, wish I didn't know his side of the story so well.

    Tightly scribed, Poetess! And too true. Stand your ground, if you know like I know.

    Saleem
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya on top of thangz so keep ya pose......
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you gentlemen!

    Now when another man tells you , you are right about another man! Now that's a confirmation. Especially if it's your brother's...
    Thank you for reading this "Affirmation"...as I journey this road
    of self discovery, new love and new life...I don't want no messin up!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:D
     
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    wit da faith and an open heart surely
    da path which u walk will be right.....journey upward sistah
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mslb

    mslb...tru dat tru dat. hope you like what you find on your road to discovery




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  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for reading!

    Always glad to see you had time to read! I appreciate it!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:D
     
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    Sometimes..
    you just have to stand your ground..
    and let him know...enough is enough!
    nice read....MsLB

    Epiphany :heart: