Black Poetry : Intense Romance Revisited

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and what the Bishop asks for... he shall recieve...

    Have you ever met someone for
    the first time & the only thought
    that enters your mind… is how
    much you’ve missed them…?
    He got me that way…
    I was… from initial contact—
    love-struck & completely stuck
    on the euphoric sensations
    created by his intellectual…
    emotional… & spiritual stimulation
    & when we touched it was sublime
    like playing in the rain in springtime
    we didn’t just make loooove…
    we made divine… my breathing was
    suspended & so was time…
    from the moment I tasted his
    beautiful mouth on mine & experienced
    the rhythm of his pain & pleasure grind
    I knew that he had blown my mind
    & I became his faithful concubine… :)
    there was no position he could mention
    that I wouldn’t gladly try…
    no place was off limits when he slid
    his hand up my thigh… while looking
    intensely into my eyes…
    it was never too late… when he called
    I would come…
    ……………& cum…
    …………………..& cum…
    & go… above & beyond my freakiest
    fantasies… all for he who brought out
    the “nasty girl” in me…

    this reminiscing is causing my lips to smile—
    I wonder if his number is still the same…
    I haven’t spoken to him in while… hmmmmmm :wink:

    © SunshyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm tellin' mommy on you...

    You be gettin' down and dirty, sis, and you know I ain't mad at ya! *Lil' sis, takin' notes*
    :hot: piece mama, but you, already, know...
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA Shyne!!

    I thoroughly enjoyed this flow! Brought some sly remembrances to my mind. :) Go head sista/gurl!

    A
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got me speechless!!!! :hot:
     
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    Lookit Ya!!!

    I knew ya was nasty like that!!!! This isn't an intense romance revisited it's some freaky **** that neva stopped!!!!

    You's a bad, bad gurl GA - but ya know I luvs ya!!!

    Nah, ya shynin' all ova this romance on the real.

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***takin my preacha's cloth to wipe my forehead***

    my...ahem, uh..whew, why this one hea's :hot:

    i, um, excuse me, needs to get some water...

    tight scribe poetess...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!! DID I DO THAT!
    VERY HOT AND SEXUAL
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a line for the hall offame of scribe...

    "we didn't just make love...we made divine"

    now that was CLASSIC beyond all definition. I have been blinded by one line and can still see the picture...and ****! what a picture it is.

    sister you are stepping up your game again thus I must step up mine as to not beleft in the dust....so watch out.

    this was majestic!

    one love, verb
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE GA

    GIRL YOU FLOW AND YOUR VOCAB BE THERE ALSO STILL AMAZE HOLW YOU KEEP ME DAZED IN RHYME KEEP UP GIRL KEEP DROPPING A LINE WITH ;YOUR FINE SELF
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Boys & Girls... (lol)

    MAPLE...
    :lol: don't you dare tell mama on me!!
    or i swear i won't give you any more pointers!!
    girl you are wild!! thanks for the love...

    MS A...
    thank you for the love... & i still wanna be
    like you when i grow up!! you're the best!!:)

    BISHOP...
    YOU... speechless?! nah uh... this was mild in
    comparision to the Hot **** you always display!
    thanks for the read!!

    GQ...
    you did it to me!! YOU!! every since SLURP...
    i been a freak!! :lol:... & a very bad gurl... but
    i knew you would appreciate it!! :wink:

    D...
    stop it!! it wasn't that bad... but you have me
    ova here laughing so hard!! "wipin' your forehead
    with your preacher's cloth... you're crazy!! :lol:

    My $$RICHNE$$...
    did you do what?!! umm... maybe! come do it again
    just so i can be sure... :wink: thanks for the
    love... My Love...

    VERB...
    if i am steppin' up my game... it is in order to
    try to keep up with you My dear!! believe dat!
    as always... thanks for the comps!! you make me
    shyne mannnn! :)

    MADD...
    i am floating... being called "Girl" by you...
    twice in one day!! what did i do to deserve it??! :wink:
    thanks for the read my perfectly poetic rapper!!


    :heart:... :heart:... and mo' :heart:...
     
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