Black Poetry : Intellect Flex

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Cade Foster, Dec 20, 2010.

  1. Cade Foster

    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm a disciple of wisdom with precise intuition
    decypherin visions through this life that I'm livin
    I fight with the driven type of hype till I've risen
    the craziest athiest with insightful envisions
    I don't need religion for enlightened enrichment
    my mind is my bible, I decide what the scripts print
    a mighty text vandalist, ravenous rhyme evangelist
    hip hop psychologist, proceed to keep it passionate
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'yeah sho ya right sound like a page out my life and my mental.......great to be reading you again
     
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    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich, appreciate the good words.
     
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    really not long enough especially after you said you didn't like mine this is not that great you don't flip words well and there is no wordplay
     
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    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You don't know what you're talkin about to be honest.
     
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    shows in my verse wordplay out the *** son may not get the credit but it's there
     
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    Cade Foster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I haven't seen one bit of wordplay in your verses, show me some lines from your pieces with wordplay.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't have to show you they all in your face
     
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    using your stuff that is wordplay try it you may like it

    read the (bible and love rhythm I'm a disciple of wisdom but the viable cataclysm) make my (head spin I've fed men) (with knowledge a gift from college) a (sniper no religion i decypher visions have become a lifer in collisions) with wrong doings
     
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    My lines were much better, and you didn't display any wordplay in there...someone needs to teach you what wordplay is.
     
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