Black Poetry : Instinctively

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Quinessential1, Aug 7, 2003.

  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "INSTICTIVELY"



    Instinctively.... you drink from me, tasting each part of we, wine

    made from fruit ripe yet forbidden and thought to be out of season.


    Take this cup of mingled manifestations so flawlessly measured

    and brought together, culminated in this devine mixture,

    supremely creating an unknown something just a little bit better than HEAVEN.


    Instinctively.... you cling to me, tasting cocoa rich and caramel thick,

    provoking visions of liquid silk in the form of Bahamas breezes

    flowing free, easy, and warm through my mind.


    Passions promises prompt me into scenes of us dripping with

    delightful dreams of prominent phenomenal metaphoric AMENS!!

    BEING

    SEEING

    THINKING

    LIVING

    Heated HALLELUJAHS were crossbred and interwoven loosely

    coming together forming Technicolor palpitations while releasing

    BABYLON'S bold beautiful secrets shared sensual and true!!

    Collective quiet confessions cloud my mindscape helping me

    overcome the obvious meaning to already answered perplexing

    proposals.

    Saying simply and simply saying YOU love I as I love WE.....as we

    always have.....INSTINCTIVELY.

    YES....

    YES....

    No end.

    INSTINCTIVELY.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    on going perfected flow .....very nice scribe poet
     
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    Collective quiet confessions cloud my mindscape helping me
    overcome the obvious meaning to already answered perplexing
    proposals. Saying simply and simply saying YOU love I as I love WE.....as we always have.....INSTINCTIVELY.
    YES.... YES.... No end.......................INSTINCTIVELY.

    "What an ending"!!!!!


    My heart has been crushed into a fine powder of love for this
    piece..............You are an "Incredible" Poet.

    :luv:Your Sage
     
  4. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    Your style get's me every time and I agree with the ending,
    it's like whoa!
     
  5. hiphop4ever

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    If I only had "Game" & a "Flow" this tyte, I'd hve nuttin'a worry bout.

    Keeponkeepin, my brutha!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved it so much, I lift you on wings granted by heaven
    and place you back at the top! :wink:
     
  7. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage-Stop it, you're spoiling me! lol
    I feel a Q&A storm coming on!


    Rich-I know you're a leader here, but again, it's cool that you take time to give time.Thank you.


    Justerika-You're gonna make me develop a crush on you!
    I'm not a crusher, but I play one in real life.(ha ha ha)

    Hiphop4ever-I am humbled by your reponse and look forward to reading some of your work.Thanks!!
     
  8. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage- I LOVE being on top...it's the only place where you can look down upon beauty as you "administer" and install the rise and fall of perfectly pronounced, HELL YEAH'S!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

    Sorry, got carried away.

    Thank you for the honor bestowed upon me.

    You're SAGE-er-rific!!!!:heart:
     
  9. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was terrific and very creative. I like your style.
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this is beautiful... hot... tyte... all of the above.