Black Poetry : Inspirational.. that's what you are

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jun 8, 2006.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is dedicated to you Nevar!


    You know what I know. Miles even thousands of miles
    space and time don't matter.

    You are truly... my

    Inspirational drop.
    Rousing is what you are to me
    A drop of sweet
    Love baby
    A pleasure to me
    And a jewel
    For the world to see

    Someone asked me today
    Why I was singing?
    Why am I so happy?

    You Nevar let me down
    I hope you don’t mind
    The whole world can see

    I have a Jones for you baby
    A knock me out
    Love dragging
    Down deep Jones
    That brings me to my knees


    So don’t ever stop
    Your my inspirational
    Sweet drop
    Picking me up
    Taking me up
    To a place on top

    So high
    I love it when you lead me down
    Whispering tonite boy.. " I'm gonna take you down "

    Take me down
    break me down

    In your arms
    Get me
    Focused again

    Give it all to
    No other
    Only me
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow didnt know i can move a person this way
    and you as a fine poet also make my day
    you have a way with the things you say

    right now im so speechless
    that you would still be with me even if i was penniless

    baby Hodee im in tears
    this drop has pierced me with an spear

    the dagger of love went straight to my heart
    could it be the beginning or start

    of what's yet to come
    with the sweet touch of yours make my body go numb
    succumb

    to your being
    there is much to Nevar to seeing

    im just in awe
    hope the inspiration that you feel for me would never stop

    because the Jones your feeling for me baby
    will probably have you going crazy
    cause this Southern Lady

    knows how to treat her man right
    have you coming home each and every night

    because your dinner will be cook
    your bath will be drawn
    and when its comes to midnight
    i hear the sounds of your yawn

    as we both retire to the place we felt magic
    and all the happiness

    we both share
    Hodee thank you for the cares

    as I continue to be your

    Inspiration............
    :smooch: :smooch:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome wow !!!!

    lovin da flava here ...........poet's
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speaking for me and hopefully he dont mind we appreciate the love that was shown boo.
     
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    had to up this one back. i just love a gentleman! Thanks Hodee!
     
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