Black Poetry : Inspiration

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord have mercy,
    The crash of waves against
    marble rocks.
    I sit...
    my feet dipping
    deliciously off the dock.
    See,
    this black nubian man
    touched me in a way no
    one could or dared to.
    He left me
    feeling cold and
    inflammed at the same time.
    When he spoke
    I was his rhythm and he
    took the part of my rhyme.
    He wasn't simply a dime,
    but a man with mad inspiration and
    a beautiful soul through and through.
    Like the fresh touch of
    morning dew and with fingertips
    as soft as silk; he worked his voodoo so much so
    I nearly fell and was about to sue.
    Please, oh please undue...
    Hmmmmmhmmmph he became the Yin to my
    dark Yang leaving me feeling
    breezy,easy and completed....
    The 120 degrees of life to my circle...
    he was fresh, he was fire, he was..he was...He was
    the earth, and I?
    Oh, I was his Oceans.​


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    "Son of the DayStar" Publishing
    "Poeta Nasciture, Non Fit!"
    Poets are born, not made
    ~PropheticNsyght​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this here is i mean wow!!
    so beautifully written so sweetly
    pose'd had great depth of true love
    all i can do is sit in aweeeeeee!!!!!!

    very nice drop poet ya flow is off the hook here
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo thank you so much bruh you are truly beautiful.
     
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    likewise .......when u drop like this it has my
    full attention i love da style u bring to the house
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I love the love that is constantly emmited from you!
     
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    you laid this one out..liking this style
    flow it....Peace Angel
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the style ma. YOU are too beautiful.
     
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    He is the One, and we flow around him. Your words never cease to take me on a journey of some sort.
     
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    :toast: :toast: :toast:
    you always find a way to inspire...

    another tight write
    from ProheticNsyght


    :toast: :toast: :toast:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite right darling. Quiet right! Thank you for your love.
     
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