Black Poetry : Inspiration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jan 21, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You inspire me.
    My inspiration.
    I bet you didn’t know.
    Every time I glance,
    And see you being creative,
    Every time you get the chance,
    I walk away with the motivation,
    That my work I could also enhance.
    So that it could be as deep as yours,
    So perfect, without any flaws,
    But still careful not to lose my own style.

    Not as skilled, but very observant.
    Not as experienced, but still willing to explore,
    Through my fantascape portal.
    All so that I can reach a certain level,
    That can measure up to your literature.
    So that I can paint a clear picture,
    Of the love that I want to feel,
    Love that sometimes doesn’t prove to be real.
    Love that keeps me turning in that wheel,
    The Wheel of Emotions…
    Yet somehow you have helped me,
    To create a clearer image,
    And to actually understand what is on the paper.
     
  2. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed your take on inspiration.

    Nice poetic flow-------Peace and Blessings
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inspiration is a wonderful thing...

    2 grow from one's style, emerging as the scribe U are destined 2 become simply by reading others.

    It's not biting, it's embracing.

    Nice piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very sweet flow here ...wow !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We should all hope to be inspired so...keep flowing, very nice drop.
     
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    very inspiring flow
    nice one here
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this very much because you are giving thanks to others for their own prose. It's wonderful to see us giving each other love.
     
  8. Khasm13

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    word....
    this is how i feel about this entire board...
    you capture this feeling so well...
    keep pen'n da pieces
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love to you! this piece was just really beautiful.
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow

    It takes an intelligent person to realize when they could learn something, and to keep those eyes open. you're gonna be so good for it
     
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