Black Poetry : INSIDE OUR COCOON

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside the chambers
    of our cocoon
    deep in this slumber
    our souls loom
    kissing beauty we share
    as our heart bare

    Dancing in the radiant
    love glist , like a
    tropical rainbow bliss
    compassion touched
    in the musical notes
    where our hearts
    meet every stroke

    My love grace call your name
    whispering my Queeneth
    how you comfort and tame
    setting off my desired flame
    as we share these walls
    in the spinnerster of reasons
    cascading our joy by seasons

    For every day past
    has blessed us pass this task
    your eyes shine in hope
    your smile embrace my life
    every touch i cling deeper
    dazzling witsparkles of love
    i knew then you were my
    angel from above

    I lay here in a sanctuary mold
    is this just infinite dream
    or my reality exploring existance
    my beloveth need not touch
    words unspoken in the desire
    i loved you long ago as we united
    and today i love you more, for
    tomorrow become our foreverness

    This why i cherish your present
    as my future under the warmth
    inside this cocoon
    i vow my all to love and protect
    i compromise my every thing
    to keep u happy
    i leave my honesty upon ya feet
    and my key to this heart at your
    fingertips i know it's love
    i feel so right day and night

    Endlessly our rapture grew deeper
    bigger , heavier and complete
    make love to me before this cocoon
    crack and the sinful air attack our
    harvest of love
    your the vast of my beings
    and the joy in my stilliness
    my love i rise and rise in sincerity
    you are my soulmate inside this
    cocoon of pure love ................
    :luvv: :heart: :love: :heart: :luvv:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: :kiss1: :kiss1: :kiss1: Rich I do not know you personally but if you are anything like your poetry you are beyond beautiful and above anything more than wonderful:kiss1:
    I really enjoyed this poem.
    You do know how to touch the essence of woman:kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u my beautiful sista your words of warmth
    touches me deep and i smile at the grace of your blessing
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh this is so sweet but ummmmmmm when are you going to give us ladies the answer to our reply in the beauty thread honey. im throwing everything i got to get you to ans us honey bun sugar pie.:blowkiss: :welldone:
     
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    This was very nice
    Loved the concept
    Of cocoon love
    Much Love Poet
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so sweet, almost like a song. Keep up the good work Rich.

    1 luv,

    AM
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Nevar and i asure you i have replyed visit it again!

    Thank u Tantrum it was one i did from my head while sitting
    in chat and sista sonnee01 was playing music my hand took over.

    Thank u dearly my sis Aaliyahmonet , it could be a nice song with
    some soft music.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful, I'm just sitting here, envisioning 2 lovers, all cuddled up together in their own little piece of Eden. A rainbow of reasons and seasons...
     
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    it really feel good when u can envision such
    thank u sista watz , it's that place we all lone
    and indeed where i want to be ....... as i smile
     
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    what about me? nice drop rich!

    Can i come inside your cocoon,
    and spin satin sheets with you,
    whirling and twirling,
    like two creatures in the jungle would do?
    Can i make a place thats just for you,
    where no man will ever venture.
    but you?
    can i line it with quilted softness..
    just for you..
    can I..
    can I..
    get in your cocoon..
    and make it ours..
    sharing it witho no others..
    until the job is done..
    and you..
    my king.. of silk worms..
    is won?:kiss1:
     
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