Black Poetry : Inside of a Depressed Mind

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  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anger
    Mad
    Tears swell
    Inside as if closed in a jail
    with four white walls
    Pain burning inside
    Tears fall
    Faster and Faster
    Hot as fire
    Tired of everything
    A headache begins to form
    “oh you know she has problems”
    “she gona be going to a doctor”
    no one listens
    no one sees
    this pain I’m in
    but I continue to smile
    try to let things go
    but I can’t the pain is too much
    it hurts to bad
    unexplainable
    nothing I do is important
    who am I
    nothing
    what can I do
    nothing
    but cry
    why
    why me I try so hard
    to be happy and enjoy life
    because it’s short
    but it’s hard
    nobody listen
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'm listening
    i hear ya call
    from flyte intently
    weep not nor pose a worried mind
    take my hand unto happiness
    da pain will cast away
    da hurt will mend
    come talk to a dear friend
    i taste the pain
    da salty tears
    i know what is fear
    yet i move forward day by day
    so continue to say what u say
    they all will hear one day
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    inside a depressed mind, many don't know that depression is something that is very hard to overcome...you must fight that battle daily...but you will one day win the battle...you will have your clear days and you will have your foggy days, but never stop fighting the battle ma!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    UniqueOne

    Very well expressed....

    Never give up...keep on steppin'...look for the joy in life and for those things which make you happiest. Wallow in these things and your life will blossom anew.

    :toast:
     
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    WELL DONE!

    Many of the worlds greatest creators, and God's creations suffer from this malady, it is real and it is debilitating...But, hold on help is on the way...The first step to the healing process is in realizing the problem...and having a form of expression doesn't hurt...I know, I am not only "The President" I am a member...:)

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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