Black Poetry : Inside of a day dream…..

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inside of a day dream…..
    I can see it shinin bright….
    I want to follow the light
    sweet jazz flowin thru da air…..
    as the warmth takes….and the doves begin
    to fly above……my love is in da air…
    see I write my lines as they begin
    to flow thru my mind..
    speakin loud..you see….
    once upon a star…in dat very moment…
    I set my vows upon you on dis heaven
    As the skies are blue…and da moon so bold….
    No one really knows…my heart begins to open
    Feelin Of it all..you took my hand….
    And shown me a brand new life…..within
    My love….i give so freely unto you…
    our hearts lace with a perfect
    Melody…..my lines are from heart
    As I share them with you….
    Once upon a star…….
    see as I speak to you
    The river flows… as I spread my wings of
    Love….in dis very moment….
    My heart was mended by the
    touch of your love
    You have proclaim to me…..
    Once upon a star…….the star have came
    To me……in my day dream…
    .that’s now reality…

    a blkangel block...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from every note
    we hittin hot
    as we play da
    air maze spot
    u and i as we fly
    to a bliss of reality
    da dream of ya mind
    da light dat shine
    is da magical twine
    of a love so sweet
    let it be comfort to thee
    the vow u set
    is mastered correct
    da heavens above
    is da blessin of my
    love
    so dream a dream for me !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inside a dream is where u
    began to roam…
    upon a star…..
    ya came to reality…
    heavens opened its doors……
    air maze…ya fly low as I watched….
    Now the mastering of da flow….
    Layin it to perfection….
    Intertwine in play……

    i dream a dream 4 u
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was nice.

    I'm glad 2 see your mind's back on track.

    But it wasn't that far off 2 begin with.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh thank you...but it was off for a few...
    when u have to place words and rearrange them
    for me its a block....thanks for da love and support
    my sweet brother...means alot
    much love to ya....:angel1:
     
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    I slide into drems like the sandman on the prowl :sand:
    slithering through your mind "Python" style :grin:
    Hey angel I love the drop......... :uzi:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol @ Ya CP..you wild thankz fo da love bro....:angel1:
     
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    Nice daydream..even better reality.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this makes me think of one of my
    favorite songs..."wishing on a star"
    ...although there are many renditions
    I can hear "Will Downing" crooning it...
    Very nice flow!
     
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