Black Poetry : Inside My Story

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Touchies under flowz
    da rain dropz
    the soul
    tenderly
    i embrace
    yet forth my love
    my mind in a web
    i cry in soft whisperz
    my hallow voice speak
    as tyme take hold
    under da bedded
    of life....

    inside dis piece i say a vibe
    in every other dip is a story
    who knowz da answer!???:confused:
     
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    not even one !!??
     
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    YOU GOT TOO PHILOSOPHICAL ON THEM!

    That was deep and abstract and out there made my mind stretch...to consider the possiblities of each nuance of this poem...And I know since you fly high...your imaginations and creations are above the clouds!!!!!!!:kiss:
     
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    indeed as life move on so am i wit time
    this piece splits two wayz one to da heart
    and the other to da mind ..........thankz sistah
     
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