Black Poetry : Inside My Story ""

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    In my story
    i'm compassionate
    2 dis story
    i am humble & honest
    thee dramatic voice

    I am religious by faith
    da heart forth of comfort
    i'm very well philosphical

    I'm fortunate 2 live
    beyond death
    inside my sribe
    i am the writter
    of written vibes of many
    the art of my artist hand

    I see in my soul
    da true story unfold
    da story written bold
    i be not cold nor chill
    just masterful set to thrill
    de story of rapture
    capture in da face
    i so pose of greater heart
    in the love of christ
    hand n' hand
    inside my slumber
    meeting & touched by
    the mother of Jesus
    I've prayed beside peter
    crossed da RED sea after Mosses

    now upon da land
    of woman & man
    i see inside the chambers
    my story in full
    many faces , many colours
    silver lines of thee
    thou golden gates
    upon da skies of blue
    i cherish every hope given
    that hold my promised soul
    my true treasures
    is my faith in GOD'

    inside da forest
    of green valley
    i am the village
    from the high hills
    i am the breeze
    whispering softly
    ready to take place
    tracing de track of
    friendz wit deed
    wisdom & knowledge
    is my only feed
    inside my story i am LIFE....

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    $R
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this story has the best ending :toast:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a story of a poet...
    Thankz j'h
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man oh man...
    breakin' down the things
    I strive to be.
    write that poetry, brotha Rich.
     
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    poetry is the break through to a story untold by many
    Thankz skrybe7
     
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    a poet can write their own story
    coz da mental mind compose
    a vision a taste and how it all
    should be that makes a writter
    inside my story is so much to
    grasp to and hold dear and i see
    me so to flow it's scribed .......y'all know where i'm coming from .
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inside youre story ..the poem became a part of our story..
    a story of a Treu Poet.....(son of god).
    wauw.. i think i know where you coming from......
    now i have read some of youre poems ..but i thinks this one is
    of youre top 20
    i like this one its beautifull!
     
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    Thankz...... this one was written from da mental mind
    of me a poet scribing with thoughts and humble love
    liberty u feeling me understand ........
     
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    The truth of a king.
     
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    Thankz the truth spoken through da pen of a story
    that makes thou king live kingdomly
     
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