Black Poetry : INSIDE MY RAPTURE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside my rapture
    lay a bliss
    a love so sweet
    fill wit gentleness

    a blazing touch
    a caressing bond
    da comfort clutch
    of beauty from above
    dis rapture is love

    it move ya body
    in a swayful motion
    make ya scream
    wit mental notions

    it dance in ya head
    every night u go to bed
    walks deep down in yo soul
    all day like it's gold
    dis rapture is a faze
    once up close ur be amaze
    how it cover u to a smile

    gives u feelin like never before
    hold u deeper and much more
    this rapture is of me
    da lover who sit above thee
    i am the father of cupid
    they call me big daddy luvpid

    dis rapture come wit heat
    the extreme to sweep u off ya feet
    it's meek and mild feel it as u sweat
    dis rapture bliss mesmerize
    u might become wet
    come wit compassion to take control
    of ya body & tender soul
    it claims pain as it heal
    what's broken dis love mend in thrill
    send a wind wave brushing u to chills
    dis love of rapture is very real
    from the master of extreme
    get ready coz love i bring

    it's hot as pepper
    cold as steel
    yet fill wit tender lovin care
    remember u can call me
    from anywhere
    cellphone
    house phone
    even the master roam
    dis love is your day or night
    whisper my name i come from flyte
    to get u inside my RAPTURE:
    :hot: :heart: :luv: :heart: :hot:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot thats all i can say right now
    just hot
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u .....ya spell bound in the rapture melt down
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    meltin away....
     
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    alright...........I need a long, tall glass of "ice water" right
    about now........but the sweet romance that was also
    woven in this piece is keepin me cool for now....

    walkin on the air of big daddy luvpid, right now

    awaiting the arrow......from his royal "Richness"

    this was def' hot, passionate, romantic ~ a beautiful
    mosaic of "love"
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Piece/Peace! Passionate as always...

    As she is caught up in the flight she finds the rapture...not a moment past to late it's love shes after...from the first kiss to the last there will be laughter...cause for sure this girl is caught up in the rapture...nightfall comes not quickly enough! The rapture brings pleasure sure enough...but even more than the physical! This flight partner is somewhat mystical!

    Blessings On Ya House!
    BJS
     
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    angelicsage.....thank u the bliss of true romance is awesome

    MsB.....hey u know me i keep the fire burnning and hearts yearning in the bliss of romance

    da art of love ....from above i send to hearts and mindz
     
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