Black Poetry : Inside My Mind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Dec 8, 2002.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Many things run
    within dis mind
    a tyme of caressing
    a tyme of cheer
    a warm emotion
    and much to fear

    inside my mind
    i give room of thoughts
    a place to think
    a place to hide
    from da light
    inside da corner
    a faded space
    a river so dry
    the secret of knowing
    is out of trace

    so much unanswered
    so much with hold
    so many memories
    all dis to bare

    working in notions
    being so fare
    knowing love much to share
    holding waves
    signs to da heart
    within da mind
    all from da start

    inside my mind
    working so grand
    wisdom & knowledge
    as a man making a stand
    my power of vision
    is my mind
    making choices
    so i vibe
    to this page i leave my mark and lay my pen down by my side
    caress my thoughts go under and hide .......da mark $$RICH$$
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always!

    Beautifully done my brother as always!
    Blessings on ya house!
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great job rich
     
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    Our minds are a beautiful part of us.

    And when we have control of them....

    WATCH OUT!!!

    Very nice piece.

    Peace.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thanks msb.....gurl u felt me here i see

    Thanks lonelypoet .......da mind move in motion

    yes Mindset.....da mind move in waves that gives the
    thoughts da edge when we work it right ....

    Thankz poets .......
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich...

    sometimes when we feel we are losing our ability to express ourselves well enough for others to hear, our hearts get heavy...but it's a good thing to just keep letting the flow, flow on...because eventually someone will hear...

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Kitana Thank u so much i need this word of hope
    u have open up da mind of thoughts that flow
    through da heart unto da paper .........holding my pen !
    Thank u...K
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know I know the feeling!

    My brotha, I feel you more than you know, I have watched you for the last year and then some and I know how dedicated you are not only as a moderator but as a Poet. When we start to feel the pain of writer's block and our ink runs cold...it leaves a scar on your soul! See, you have the ability to inspire when you keep on writing and working through it...it might not be the same as post "writer's block", but your strength and beauty never escapes the attentive reader. Nor, does it escape the hearts that feel the same pain. Hang on in there and lets do what we do...SO WELL! LOL
    Love ya!
    Blessings on Ya house!
    P.S Tell the Watcher I miss him!:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    msb gurl u know ya been da gentle spot
    in my side and da poetic love we vibe
    feelin each other soul free
    i thank thee for sweet msb.............Thankz sis i'm movin through it
     
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    we can never have 2 much love ... keep loving what u do and do what u love most important let love ..... love u
     
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