Black Poetry : Inside my Love

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My love is an house without a door
    I'm like a bridge you never seen before
    my love like a place where ya heart can be store'd
    i'll protect it and speak of it wit a mighty roar

    I will give my love, if you come inside
    I will treasure ya spirit on a soulful ride
    I will bring togetherness against da odds
    I'll enter the unknown wit da push of my rod

    My domain for you, is where i'll be
    you may enter without an key
    this love was born for you & me
    inside da house of love so free

    I will give unto you da ring of token
    provide understanding so it's never broken
    lift all pains and clean up da stains
    change thoughts evil my brang

    My love will comfort ya days ahead
    caress thy body when in bed
    honor the moments when love is fed
    my love is da house to be wedd

    Inside my love is a house
    crispy clear and quiet as an mouse
    a place of warmth and to be nounce
    when you visit my love as my spouse

    come in !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such endearing words, making that house of love sound like a home of warmth and care. What a lovely scribe brother poet.
     
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    Thank you sister watz yes the house of love is my temple !
     
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    $RICH$:
    What a beautiful write!!!
    Inside Your Love is so lovely.

    Much Luv
     
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    A place u wanna be ...come inside for da love is like a sail on the beautiful sea
    thank u sis.....
     
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    Inside you love is warn and inviting, and quite lovely. This is written so well that I wish I was the lucky lady that was has the right to come inside your love. Well done my brother.
     
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    asimplepoet.....It's yours for the taken if and when ya ready to be blanket in sweet
    caress and warm embrace just come inside my world of love.

    Thankz sis
     
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    My love is a well deep and cool
    take a dip take a drink.
    My love is available and always yielding
    My love for you is an Oasis in the desert of life.
    My love is for you.

    $$R$$$
    As always I love it
     
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    thatgirl74......
    Thank u as i invision your love , i see deep inside da melo's of ya heart
    may i come in ? to venture ya world of essence....
    your words always come on time big thankz sis happy ya back
     
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    Now surely a man of your sophistication, style and grace, already has someone occupying that house of love, you can't be inviting everyone in, although, I too, wanted to knock on your door for that one. Is there enough room for all of us? :) Great write brother poet, Love On!
     
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