Black Poetry : Inside Lewis Prettiman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 8, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he has an easy smile,
    a charming way he shades his eyes

    and all the ladies wonder

    if caught up inside his storm
    does he roar, does he thunder?

    he has a pleasant laugh,
    and intelligent conversation

    and the ladies can't help but talk

    of all the beautiful possibilities
    suggested by his walk

    he is elegance, and class
    simmering sexuality, so good looking in his clothes

    and the ladies have to stare

    filled with gratifying imaginings
    of all that's going on in there...


    Alyce (c) 2002

    From "B-52"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!! DIS BRUTHA IS A MAN OF PURE LOVE EVERY LADY
    VISION OF INSIDE THERE DREAMS .......ALYCE FLOW HEAD ON!!!
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you bring out how the ladies scrutinize a brotha. Scandalously delicious piece. Full of all that sensuous innuendo you do so well. They used to look at me like that, A. :wink:

    BRB
     
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    Alyce

    Tyte piece!! :)
     
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    i love candy drop poems like this...
    helps ease my chocolate feenin!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop it stop it...

    you're gonna make me blush...tight:D
     
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    Giggle

    Girlfriend , just thinking about whats going on in there ...
    got me giggiling like a school girl
    is he single ?
    does he have a brother?
    cousin ?
    best friend?
    lololololol
    Nice :x:
     
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    Now how you gona up and just put my business in da streets. (lol)
    na I aint never been dat pretti
    wasn't me

    seriously though this was tight, make a n***a wanna shave and comb his hair
    (you know just looking for attention)
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, I Can Dig It...

    Brotha sounds like a quality gentleman to me!!!

    Nice job Alyce!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all! This one is special.

    :heart:

    alyce
     
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