Black Poetry : Inside a dream…….

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Up and down within da wind…
    Flow so strong…I fly…….
    the wind is
    callin…
    ……….callin
    and it wont stop…
    purple mountains
    …….up
    …………up
    high…I spread my wingz………..
    green land……….
    looking down as I begin to fly…
    wind whirl…as I swirl thru the air..
    on a high wind….
    Round and
    …………round ….
    Up
    …………. up
    in da
    …………wind……
    passin the moon
    watchin the starz…..
    within time it release
    not knowin
    but feeling as the wind
    takes me..and blows thru my hair…..
    up
    …….down
    ………………around
    ………………………..and thru…..
    no line not even sure it’s a poem
    just things runnin thru my mind….
    Slide across….as the wind takes me……
    Oceans so blue as the doves begin to sing….
    this wind….
    Turin
    Liftin
    Grownin
    Feelin

    Round and
    …………round ….
    Up
    …………. up
    in da
    …………wind……
    bliss of a blast..
    emotional turn..
    blind to the sea….makin it to the ocean…
    inside da wind….
    Movin across the wind
    Free in spirit……lost in da mind..
    Twistin
    ………in
    and
    ………..out
    as it takes me up
    …………………up high….
    Feel the power….as I ride the breeze…..
    Inside a dream…….


    ................................…
    HAPPY HOLIDAYS
    my Destee Family…..
     
  2. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi Mzblkangel

    this piece reminds me of my childhood dreams
    where i wish i could fly
    and i actually had a dream that i will never forget
    at the age of 6 or 7
    I dreamed I was flying above the city roofs
    AND WHAT A SENSATION THAT WAS!!!
    I was a black comic hero in a red suit and a afro :star:
    ....LOL ...hahaha....for real...a child's imagination :spin:
    even when I was older I was trying to "re-dream" that dream
    but I didn't get it as often as i wanted too...

    This was a cute piece!

    btw--->:party: HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO U 2 :party:

    straight from the :heart:
    moham
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This read was calm and serene, very nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a dream this took me somewhere and back
    i really love da drop on dis one
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    moham..thank you i miss them dreams to dont come as much so
    i often write about them..thanks for da read....

    watzinaname..i am glad ya likes thankz girl..much love and peace to you

    $$RICH$$..i am glad lets me know i am doing my job when i set a dream so free....thank you fo da love and support my RICHNESS.....Peace
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin tha imagery and thoughts.....let me in on this dream mz b........lol....
    im jelaous....ha....
     
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    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exhilarating Liberating Invigorating Permeating Poetry

    I Lubbz dis herer’ Prose
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dont be jealous...lol....glads ya likes
    the imagery and thoughts.... :D
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww..glad ya feelin dis
    thanks for da read..:angel1:
     
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