Quiet Poetry Lounge : Insatiable

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mysslez, May 20, 2008.

  1. mysslez

    mysslez Member MEMBER

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    The goodness you give me

    All over me

    Wet like I like it

    Silky like I love it.



    A summery stream from a sweltering pit

    igniting a feverish lust of my own

    Performing lascivious conduct with sacrilegious reverence

    I moan in satisfaction

    though it's never enough



    Like a shot to the head

    I take it

    An oh so sweet dessert

    One lick at a time.

    Mmmmm..

    I absorb it

    All of it

    with explicit intent



    Finesse of a Manhattan

    Smoothness of Patron

    Enough bite for me to bite

    my lips in expectation

    heightening my senses

    to the depth of you

    the wealth of you

    just to get a taste

    of

    you


    Rather selfish

    how I take without apology

    hypnotizing you to unleash and deliver

    all that is you

    absent of self-control

    solely reliant on my ability to extract with exact

    pleasure and precision

    dedication and submission

    appetite and aggression



    Leave me

    wanting

    more

    Please.





    LeZ
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a vivid, alluring description of passion galore.
     
  3. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! What a way to appeal to the senses! You painted a vivid picture there poetess!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was an awesome scribe ...
     
  5. mysslez

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    Thank you all.....i appreciate the love......makes me inspired
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    spreading love do make one feel a poetic love type vibe it kinda embrace you..
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mysslez:
    HOTT....HOTT.....DROP.....


    Much Luv
     
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