Black Poetry : Insanity

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you come to visit me
    Within my mental insanity
    Looking through the bars
    Of the brutally
    Minded
    Me

    Deep within my stream of conciousness
    I scream the cry of the insane
    My soul has been mentally
    Heart broken

    Peace of mind
    Is a distant memory
    Gone
    Away forever
    With your goodbye

    Mental stability
    Wrapped within the
    Padded walls of my
    Mental prison
    Insanely blinded
    By loves deciet
    Broken promises
    Made in passions heat

    Have you come to visit me
    Within my mental insanity
    Looking through the bars
    Of the brutally
    Minded
    Me

    In ~san ~ ity
    Within my MEN~tal ~ ity
    Lost
    Forgotten
    me

    Natasha
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've come to restore Reality.
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Savior

    I know i can always count on you to come rescue me :heart:
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what inspired this terific poem?
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AACOOLDRE

    inspired long ago by a broken promise made ........but my heart was somehow liberated by the experience :x:
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reading this you can almost feel the desperation for the mental anguish to stop..and for the peace to resume inside..
    "My soul has been mentally, Heart broken"..what a terrific description...

    K
     
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