Quiet Poetry Lounge : Insanity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Jun 12, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have you come to visit me
    Within my mental insanity
    Looking through the bars
    Of the brutally
    Minded
    Me

    Deep within my stream of conciousness
    I scream the cry of the insane
    My soul has been mentally
    Heart broken

    Peace of mind
    Is a distant memory
    Gone
    Away forever
    With your goodbye

    Mental stability
    Wrapped within the
    Padded walls of my
    Mental prison
    Insanely blinded
    By loves deciet
    Broken promises
    Made in passions heat

    Have you come to visit me
    Within my mental insanity
    Looking through the bars
    Of the brutally
    Minded
    Me

    In ~san ~ ity
    Within my MEN~tal ~ ity
    Lost
    Forgotten
    me


    Natasha
     
  2. blackstar

    blackstar Member MEMBER

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    :D :D :D :D :D :D
    I feel u girl. I've been mentally insane b4 to. tightwork;)
    :p :p :p :p :p :p
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha...Been there and done that......
     
  4. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been there many times. I suspect I'll be there many more. Feeling this. Thank you for sharing.

    BE
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in--san--ity

    within my mentality

    tyte*

    i'm experiencing it at the moment*


    be healthy...



    sean.
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...

    the dark clouds of insanity...disturbing my mentality.

    flow widit den.:)

    One.
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    Girrrrrrrl

    this is tyte

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BABY GURL

    I'VE BEEN TO THE END OF THE WORLD
    I'VE FACEDB THE TIDES
    I KNOW THIS SO WELL
    BEEN HERE AND THERE MANY MANY TYMES
    SURELY I'LL GO AGAIN AND AGAIN!!
    WELL DONE SIS......:)
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    'Tasha your poetry is awesome

    simply awesome

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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