Black Poetry : insanity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 24, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a body was used yesterday,
    against will,
    defiled,and
    removed

    then he stole her innocent soul
    with a bullet, that told
    secrets of nocturnal nightmares
    and internal insanities

    he ran....
    breathed air
    kurupted by her blood
    that was on his hands

    confines of her cries in his
    memory glands

    he ran....
    into his own hellhole
    his heart so cold

    and her spirit fell into
    darkness



    :maddd:
     
  2. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so heart felt. Thanks for sharing.

    Much love
    Potic sista
     
  3. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is something so many experience but not many want to admit
    Thanks for sharing and bringing it to the light, I often talk on such things as well for I have been there as a child. check out closet wounds at http://www.aqueenpassing.com And keep expressing form your soul Great piece poet!

    Blessings
    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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    This was deeply felt, nice flow, story.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deeply felt dis was a piece of reality so many keep quiet
    let it be heard...
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..the_story
    so sad
    feeling all of this
    deeply
    my sistah
    Peace
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall, this has to get out, to many children are being exposed to this...
    :( its horrible....:(
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl you R an amazing talent far beyond your years...i truly pray the best for your wonderful verbal verocity :)
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u, triniti for your words, of blessing and encouragement, and i thank u for always suporting me in all of my ways:D
     
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