Black Poetry : Ins & Outs

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Jan 30, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're doing like I do

    And

    Thinking this is about you

    A big mistake for show

    Ignoring down below

    Doesn't performs its best potential

    Not knowing in vs out

    Why continue to pout

    More nerves are shoot



    No more dang shout out
    Cause I know its for me.
    Verses what u know.
     
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    too many people trying to make stuff about them...when it ain't.

    pondering...:thinking:

    the river floweth.
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It happens doesn't it?
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all too often, my friend. all too often.
     
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    Hate is hate in every venue.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I've seen this far too many time
    and folks drive it hard and it's
    not there turn in the drivers seat....
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Crucked System we travel to see the stars!
     
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