Black Poetry : Inquiring Hearts

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  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So **** agitated with the same questions we reiterate
    Not so calmly engorged in the reasons behind what is so bluntly placed on our lips
    Same old insecure ****
    Or maybe I misplaced the deepness of our words maybe there’s something else lurking behind the highest mountain of
    You love me?
    Perhaps it’s just my pessimistic sighs answering in my mind that lies in the deepest valley of
    Would you ever hurt me?
    I don’t understand why I can’t fathom the reasons of our
    Not quite doubts on if we really feel beyond flesh when we undress in each other’s presence
    Do we more than pleasantly engage in the continuous act of you pounding repeatedly in me
    It hurts
    It hurts
    Don’t ever stop the pain of you
    My pleasure
    You reach beyond pleasing me and you often surpass
    My sunny spot
    Where I seem to relentlessly glow
    But what seems to always show but
    You love me?
    Would you ever hurt me?
    And
    Endlessly questioning the unaccepting subconsciously known fact that
    We would die for each other



    © Tawanda Roberson
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice scribe ya pen is hot
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is some make you think ish! I love it. I guess I'm a have to go in the archives and learn more about you! lol I agree wit RICH your pen is HOT
     
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    you get madd props for the flow, the truth and etc...
    why do we ask questions knowing that we will die for each other?

    nice to have you here (droppin' classics and thangz)
     
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    So so sweet to know that a love like this...still exist :)
     
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