Black Poetry : ...Innocent Girl...Non-Innocent World...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Sep 7, 2004.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
    Innocent face
    No innocent world
    Innocent grace
    No innocent girl
    Once innocent body
    But now no more
    Once innocent virgin
    But not a whore
    She would’ve saved it
    For one that she loved
    Lord knows I wish
    I’d done the above
    I was innocent faced
    In a fast paced world
    Grace stripped away
    Beauty unfurled
    Sexual fantasies
    She fulfilled
    Sexual lovin’
    She needed to heal
    All of wounds that
    Seemed to grow more
    From the screams
    yelled from rape before
    Innocent face
    Innocent victim
    Innocent girl
    grief stricken
    Lord help her soul
    Only you can
    Grasp and hold
    Hold ‘til she stands
    Innocent girl
    Innocent victim
    Non innocent world
    I hope you listen…
     
  2. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Apr 7, 2003
    Messages:
    254
    Likes Received:
    8
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +8
    :crying: this truely touched me. I understand and feel every line of this scribe. You're not alone. Much love given

    Poetic Sista
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 4, 2003
    Messages:
    2,845
    Likes Received:
    36
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    nyc
    Ratings:
    +43
    there is a wonderful childlike innocence in the way you unfurled that flow..
    so within the "nomore".. the child is there..."grace stripped away"...grace rekindled-new beginnings...
    thank you for sharing...
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
    thanks for ur comments:)
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Always a sad story when innocence is stripped away. You laid this gently, yet right on point.
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    sad tale of life and how da innocent become victims
     
  8. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,244
    Likes Received:
    14
    Occupation:
    Love my job!
    Location:
    Seattle
    Ratings:
    +15
    Man, that was deep...I love the poem and the message!
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 16, 2003
    Messages:
    2,781
    Likes Received:
    15
    Occupation:
    College Student, Bookstore Clerk
    Location:
    ...down south...
    Ratings:
    +16
  10. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2004
    Messages:
    832
    Likes Received:
    18
    Ratings:
    +18
    this is a very beautiful poem
    and yet very tragic
    yes i am listenin...
    keep the flow goin... :cool:
     
Loading...