Black Poetry : Innocent Eyes

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  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In this piece Jesus is speaking to a child telepathically as he is being arrested and carried off to be judged then crucified while starring into the eyes of an innocent child. Happy Easter Yall!!
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    Staring into a face of innocent eyes
    I despise the men who have come
    to arrest me.

    Who have come and destroyed lives
    with lies of corrupt minds blind to
    the light man posses inside

    Scared of the truth I’ve preached from
    the shores of Galilee to all the temples
    and city streets with the power and
    authority given by my father in Glory

    These men have come not knowing
    Knowing not of what is to come
    Knowing not that I am the Son
    But to appease their tainted soul disbelief

    I must go now my precious child
    to sit at the right hand of the father
    as his beloved Son to intercede for
    the sins of man daily and send forth
    a Holy Spirit to fulfill the scripture

    This must be done so that a new day
    will come to complete us as one in the
    Spirit for all who believe

    Flee my child!!
    Flee!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RIVERTING MY BRUTHA! You already know i love this one!!!

    keep the flow
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Definitely my Brutha!!

    thanks for coming through!!:eek:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad.


    reading this... i immediate-ly felt 2 things...

    1. blessed to experience your wonderful gift... &
    2. proud of the strong Poet you have become.
    (& still i watch you grow. that's really real lil brotha!)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my SISTA!!

    This one here took a lot out of me to write...
    I'm so happy u liked now I can move on.

    Thanks for stopping through SIS!!:)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very enjoyable read.
    Scribe On Poet!.

    Happy Easter to you too

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  7. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You...

    Coco for stopping through!
    Glad u enjoyed!!:)
     
  8. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad

    Thank you for sharing this bruh!

    Reas
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No Problem Reason...

    Glad u could stop through!
    Preciate ya Bruh!!:)
     
  10. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One word - tyte!!!!!
    I can't wait to see this acted out.
    Love it boo! :)
     
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