Black Poetry : Innocence Lost

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every chance I get
    I am convicted
    Innocence lost
    Soul is afflicted
    Paying the cost
    Justice gone bad
    Evil conspirators
    Confining the man

    When I bust out
    America's Wanted
    What's that about ~
    Rebelliously cunning
    So where am I going
    If not taking a stand
    Why the denying
    God's likeness I am

    Who are you showing
    Conforming to them
    What are "we" growing
    Outside your own land
    How are you living
    Dead or alive ?
    People are dying
    Buying suicide

    "C'mon Bigger, get in that sell"


    Darryl Abdu Omari :court:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My my my, 1poetsought!!!!
    The title caught my I in one glance!!! I have a poem with the exact same title. I was so curious to your version of this subject. Maybe I will have the courage to post my version now.
    This piece(your version) was very very nice.
    " Every chance I get
    I am convicted
    Innocence lost" and
    " How are you living
    Dead or alive ?
    People are dying
    Buying suicide"

    so nice, so real, so true....
    I wish you a lot of love.
    moham
     
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    deep write poet..enjoyed this ride
    thanks for sharing....Angel
     
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    Word up! You done brought it again, my brothah. Peace
     
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    How are you today family? As always, I appreciate you as well. Thanks!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop bruh love ya pen man.......
     
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    Thanks, Bro. $$RICH$$
     
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    Words of a true prophet I love it continue to teach.
     
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    keep bringin' the real brotha!! I like the way u think, the way u write, the way u bring peace through thought. keep bringin the knowledge and make these people think!!!

    :teach: :teach: :teach:
     
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    ASHANTA, prophetess supreme, I feel akin to you in spirit.
     
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