Black Haiku : ...innervision.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by elayne., Sep 1, 2002.

  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my heart is breaking
    'cause i see me without you
    & love's still alright.
     
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    Funny Elayne, or not so funny, but you just described my evening in 17 syllables, too. Which is why I wrote my haiku. We will just have to remember love never dies, and to love and lose is always better then the alternative. I think this another Haiku.
     
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    gaylee.... i guess we just in each other's heads! :)
    thank you for takin' the time to grace me witcha presence!

    itsallLove, chile!!
     
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