Black Poetry : Inner Pain...

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***This is in rememberance of the all of the precious children killed brutally and they have not recieved any justice.


    From the bowles of the earth,
    spilled blood cries out.
    Crimson
    Red
    Scarlet
    blacker than black in
    the deepest abyss of the terrain.
    Sorrow,
    Pain,
    mirrored deep in her cry...
    the cry of millions unjustly hurt
    and destroyed.
    The primal cry of Able's spilled blood.
    He, like an ancient Jesus, bears the spilled
    essence of those who have never accquired
    justice; from the past, the present, to the future.
    The cries begin as echoes,
    low and faint and with quick progression evolve
    into screams and symphonic strains of
    anguish and gnashing teeth...
    When will it end?
    When will their voices be heard?
    When will their inner pain be soothed????

    ~Copyright 2004
    ~Capucine​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could feel the anguish in this. Awful for any to suffer, but particularly heart wrenching when it is a child in pain. Deeply felt.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your love and continuous support is deeply felt poetess. Peace and soul.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this deep. i would actually love to hear this read. i think it would give me chills great work
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW Thank you so much my dear. I appreciate the love.
    One love.
     
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    feeling da deep pain and anger and the heart for the children
    this brings tears
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed it does bruh. And its been going on too long. Thank you for the love.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep scribe ...you need to come on in voice chat and drop this one
    this was awwesome scribing my friend........feeling you here fo sho
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes......














    Libertylady:heart:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Angel.
    Your words mean much more than you know
     
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