Black Poetry : Inner Journey

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Sep 8, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here all day long

    On a journey call

    Suicidal questions?

    How far you've come

    Searching near and far

    Learning every lesson

    Don't let love scar

    Way beyond the stars

    On your inner journey

    Amidst the storm

    Love who you are

    I'm okay :spinn:

    Entrancing ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :sleep:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    To look deep within and know that you are ok just because you are you, what a blessing. ^5 on this positive flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed know thy self is fine and looking within to see that is a blessing
    strong message to all to know thy self journey inside deeper....tyte scribe
     
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    within is what counts know thy self..gives you a stronger love....nice write...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    With the world paying so much attention to the outward appearance no one is ever looking at the inward parts and how ugly they can be. but I think it's great when a person can look at themselves from the inside out. They may not be proud or like everything that they see but hey through all the imperfections I, me, is still okay. Inspiring drop.
     
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    ...so so true :jumping:
    love the message, poet!
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you. I hope that this brings a peaceful moment to someone, somewhere, when needed.
     
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    Exactly, brother! Sometimes we have to let what is within shine out, and be okay with it.
     
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    Brother 1PoetSought ... my inner journey is going to be spent looking for you ... i know you're there, somewhere ... cause i feel this overwhelming sense of peace and joy simply considering you ... so, if you see a shadow behind you, or hear footsteps nearby ... that's me ... looking for you ... so i can drag you into voice chat, get you on the mic and let you deliver some of this awesome poetry in beautiful, dark, vibrating sounds ... yep ... a Sister is on a journey ... looking for you! ... don't be trying to hide 'cause the world just aint that wide! :kiss:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  10. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got me smiling again, lol
     
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