Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Nov 25, 2001.
she was beautiful
but she had an ugly soul
that was her downfall
(c) nfn 2001
I have seen this haiku, walking on the beach, in the mall and at my workplace. What truth...what depth.
Keep flowin my sistah. I love this profound poem.
nothing but the truth! well said, sista K. Well said!
i see the outter beauty yet not so inside
ya knowledge of truth is reality in our
so called world today.......speaketh sistah K.....
Truthful haiku. Just say, no to an ugly soul and begin to glo from the inside out. Thanks
Madd Sistahly Love
Joyce..thank you..pretty is as pretty does....but it's what is inside that matters...and if you are beautiful on the inside, it will reflect on the outside..I appreciate your comments..
A...thanks...and yes...just because the package has pretty paper, doesn't mean you'll like the present inside...
Rich..I have to agree...so much pressure is placed on people to "look" beautiful....thankfully we don't all see "beauty" with the same eyes..
Coco...yesss....you have a point...we make the choice don't we...
there are so many people out there that are like that. this piece speaks loud and clear and i'm lovin' it! even through haikus your thoughts are powerful. very well done, dear poetess.
she also has a brotha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yup I sho seen em too
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