Quiet Poetry Lounge : Inking my soul

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through every page
    written word
    my soul spoke
    in vibes of u
    my heart open for u
    cryin out rapidly
    whispering truth
    as i stumble
    beyond the edge
    wondering if i'm heard
    inking my soul
    callin u
    hiding behind this maze
    not seeing yet feel
    my spirit lift in joy
    knowing that i am
    why O' why haven't
    u cometh forth
    partake in my journey
    and allow my loveth to touch
    did i not ink my soul
    where u can feel the wetness
    the drips of my quill
    the brush of my strokes
    and the love in my heart
    i've inked my soul dry
    fell in this slumber of love
    struggling to pen u
    yet i know i must go on
    until u hear thy vow
    and give in to my beckoning
    through da ink of my soul
    to canvas ....look deeper !

    :em4600:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've written my soul onto paper
    with each sweetened tear
    I've dripped one more bit of my
    love for you dear
    But I worry that you have not tasted
    it's pure essence, and I fear
    that my scribes have been wasted
    How could you not know the truth
    in the words that I speak?
    How could you not tell that
    it is you that I seek?
    This simply can not be
    and somehow, you must feel my plea
    for my words have been laden with love
    that is deeper than any sea
    For what I have sought to capture
    in this inked endeavor
    Is to say that my love for you
    will remain, forever...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Each line calls out in words
    but somehow still not heard
    painting pictures of love
    upspringing from above
    inking da heart of my soul
    confessin as truth unfold
    through da pen and quill
    paging what da body feel

    i'll continue to ink my soul
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Brother $$RICH$$
    wow..how come i want to cry
    Because I'm feeling so much passion
    in your poem, and it's touching my heart
    just that deep. And the Poet flow from
    you sis watzinaname is just awesome...yes yes yes
    Loving this two for one :)
    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when a soul speaks deep emotions merge out
     
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    I enjoyed reading this. I could feel your passion as you write whats in your heart and in your soul. Beautiful. Please do continue.
     
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    thank u from my heart
     
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    the waves of each beat sing in da written voice as i ink my soul
     
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