Black Poetry : Injured to make it

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rain or shine,
    the souls gotta keep going.
    no weather-no light feather,
    can keep the soul from glowing.
    the fire that breathes breath,
    into the system of body.
    where the red fern grows not,
    but where thoughts root naughty.
    ha.
    yeah those thoughts consume us,
    when we think we're thinking.
    rain or shine i repeat,
    is the sun shining through-or are we sinking?
    soul so vulnerable,
    to the world and it's cause.
    therefore i put in caps,
    BELIEVE IN GOD!
    because the only way to survive,
    is not to thrive,
    but to realize,
    that the mud where we fell in was put there,
    so that we could learn to rise.
    and so you see,
    the souls gotta keep going no matter what.
    because in the end,
    the soul is the only thing left.........the only thing..... :injured:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and through da soul is a spirit flow on
    happy to see ya sis back in flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thoughts to ponder. We appreciate the getting up, when we have experienced being cast down. In God there is much hope, this is true. I hear you, flow on.
     
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    nice flowing i feel the vibe fo sho flow head on...WB home
     
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    this was a heartfelt flow...makes u think
     
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    Praise God, end of story.

    Love the way,

    You give HIM glory.
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this poem can uplift even the deepest spirits. This poem had a tyte flow and serious impact on the message. That's right Caps it, BELIEVE IN GOD!!!!!!
    im loving this one

    keep the flow goin
     
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    Deep write, sis - I like, I like. Great to read you again. :coffee:
     
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    Everything happens 4 a reason, it's up 2 U 2 get something out of it.

    Very nice piece.
     
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