Black Poetry : Infatuated

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  1. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    Is it cause I end the day thinking of you
    Just to arise with the same point of view
    Night to day, and day to night
    With the same reflection on my mind
    Wondering but not saying
    For I already know the response
    Is it cause you the sh*t boo
    And all I wanna do is take a whiff of you
    Inhale all your thoughts and let it be known
    That I'm the one you love and adore
    And I to you, a hundred times more
    If we lock our minds our hearts can soar
    Block out the past and live in the now
    Cause a future with you is all I require
    You as my queen and I your sire
    Are you willing the give me you heart
    And I shall take it and lead you through the dark
    These are the things I say to you
    Please don't take them to leave my heart blue
     
  2. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi best friend yeah you are a little soft and all but I like it. HEY EVERYBODY URBAN POET IS MY BEST FRIEND!!!!!!! welcome to the destee family too kid.
     
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    For she has saturated every thought and nuance of you...Very endearing piece, I enjoyed this read. Welcome to destee Urbanpoet, hope you make yourself at home just like soulful2006.
     
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    very nice well felt
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    nice write
     
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    Welcome
    nice flow
     
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    Welcome

    Very nice scribe, welcome to the forum.
    One_Love
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tyte scribe my brotha cuz i was really feelin this u gets 2 thumbs up!!! Sounds like a poem Omar Tyree would write lemme find out u got skillz like him!!! Thank you for writing this!
     
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    Tank all of you
     
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