Black Poetry : inevitable

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  1. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    inevitable

    i keep fighting
    and denieing
    but
    as fragile a heart can be
    there's nothing
    as strong as my love

    and i keep trying
    but the rivers of my heart
    through desserts and savannahs
    through mountains and rocks
    destructively causing erosions
    dragging everything on their way
    keep flowing uncontrollably
    to you

    where you seem to
    carry me away
    on waves as gentle
    as the thought of
    you and me
    lullabying me
    into a dream


    salt and sweet are combined
    where my heart reaches your sea
    bitter waters evaporate,
    forming clouds that drift by
    the heavens,together you and I
    and the gods silently shake their heads
    knowing your heart will never be mine

    they say all is written
    in the stars
    thus man can't change his destiny?
    I wish I could change your heart

    until then i keep floating
    around like a fool
    with a desired destination
    and salty tears
    keep filling up my rivers


    (and the whole story starts all over again....people in love are hopeless LOL)
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i likes...
    all the way down..tight flow...
    much love...:angel1:
     
  3. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you ....lovely angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    through the love
    and into da heart
    this where it all start
    it can be if self believe
    open , relax and recieve
    da wave of love ride da tide
    feel da depth of love inside
    so let the tears of salty become
    the sweet tears of joy
    and fill ya river so u can float
    and true lovers is always in a maze ...

    Tyteeeeeeeeee scribe love this here
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    love is many things
    but it is never hopeless...

    you described your feelings to da t
    on this joint....very descriptive....
    keep come'n with da craft
    btw...i like your name
    in the book dune the wisest
    of the reverend mothers had your name....:)
    peace
    khasm
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    niiiiiiiice! I can relate, brothah. Nice flow.
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol:
    dont I know it lol
    you awakened dormant memories within...:)
    I found my self floating the very same rivers again...:look:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah
    i can feel you
    on this drop
    love is so many
    seasoning in a pot
    nice scribe
    Peace
     
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    Each love is one closer to that lasting love.

    Each love teaches you that you are that much more capable of loving, because if you weren't, you wouldn't try.

    It is better to have loved and lost.............

    Nice piece.
     
  10. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich, that was a nice and hopeful reply...-Thank you-

    Hi Khasm, love isn't hopeless, but sometimes people are. And I know, cause I'm in that state right now. Hopelessly in love...My name by the way consist of the first 5 letters of my surname. That's it..nothing special. No secret meaning or anything LOL. Oh & another thing. Book dune? What's that? Thanks for your comments.
    ....-Peace to you 2- :smile: :smile:

    Triniti...it's good to see you can laugh about it. Sometimes when I have to laugh about myself how foolish I act when I'm in love. Hey.. but I enjoy every moment and I keep hoping.

    Hi Bluewater, thanks for the feel

    Hi PositiveMindSet, I agree with everything you wrote. Especially this sentence.
    Qoute:

    Each love teaches you that you are that much more capable of loving, because if you weren't, you wouldn't try.

    Thanks for replying
     
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